I had survived.

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The huge camouflaged transport plane sat on the hot runway

Everyone was in short sleeve kahki uniforms

A cloumn of troops with duffel bags moved away from the plane

My column picked up our duffel bags and headed toward the plane

As the two columns passed each other someone in their column shouted, Vietnam here we come

Someone in our column shouted, Don’t get your balls shot off

Someone in their column shouted, It’ll all be over by Christmas

The End

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  • ZuzooVn on Nov 20, 2010

    Are you Vietnamese?

  • Thomas Hodge on Nov 20, 2010

    Excellent article. I can remember that moment. boarding the plane. It is strange how we remember little tiny details the most.

  • Guy Hogan on Nov 20, 2010

    ZuzooVn, no I’m not Vietnamese. I was an American soldier in Vietnam during the war.

  • Uma Shankari on Nov 20, 2010

    Great to be back home, isn’t it?

  • devil91 on Nov 20, 2010

    great poem thanks for sharing

  • Val Mills on Nov 20, 2010

    But it wasn’t over by Christmas, was it Guy. And for many it will never be over in your minds. Good work.

  • LoveDoctorGoodBye on Nov 20, 2010

    Great work.

  • Carolyn Cordon on Nov 20, 2010

    War is never over. So much is lost and the memories gained can bring the bad stuff back, over and over again.

    I feel for the men and women damaged to ‘bring us peace’.

  • LoveDoctorGoodBye on Nov 20, 2010

    It’s an honor to have served in the Vietnam War. Did you ever witness or have to pull out burned bodies out of a helicopter? It must be hard having to deal with grief or depression and just when you think it is over it comes back to haunt you. The memories will always be there.

  • albert1jemi on Nov 20, 2010

    great share

  • PSingh1990 on Nov 20, 2010

    Nice Share.

    :-)

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Nov 21, 2010

    Down memory lane….

  • Analyst on Nov 21, 2010

    Thanks for the share!

  • Guy Hogan on Nov 21, 2010

    Love Doc, I saw a lot of action in Vietnam but not a lot of death. Let’s just say I saw enough death.

  • bigpapadan on Nov 21, 2010

    Guy, first let me say that this may the best yet… wonderful work.
    My dad was in ‘Nam in ‘69 toward the end of his career and I want to say “Thank You”. You guys all did something very special…
    As a vet myself I understand the importance of those words and know that you guys didn’t hear them often enough. Again, Thank You.

  • Guy Hogan on Nov 21, 2010

    bigpapadan, I appreciate your “thank you.” Soldiers of all nations only do what they are ordered to do for good or evil.

  • Joseph Parks on Nov 21, 2010

    Respect…. A part of me wants to go into war for the adventure but another part does not want to see death and suffering. I think the latter part is the one that will win. I’ll have to find adventure elsewhere.

  • PR Mace on Nov 22, 2010

    I was just a kid during that time but I remember my older brother did two tours. It was a sad time in our history.

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