Virus Attack

stryka1966 on Oct 20, 2011

Tags: poem, sympathy, virus

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Some months ago, battling with a brute of an infection – argh – get off me !!!

Viral infection

change of complexion

Temperature high

Feels like I’ll die

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Toxic brain

under strain

Thoughts befuddled

totally muddled

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Dark as night

Awful sight

Pity party

Needing sympathy

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Comments (9)

FX777222999 on Oct 20, 2011
Good and nice piece.
Banu on Oct 20, 2011
Oh dear!
Rest and medicines will do good to you!
Get well soon! xx
CHIPMUNK on Oct 20, 2011
Well mentioned in your poetry take care
Neva Flores on Oct 20, 2011
a sick baby
carmen on Oct 20, 2011
Nice one Alec, hey but you get to stay in bed for a day or two and getting a lot of attention
SUE on Oct 20, 2011
THANKFULLY NOT RECENTLY!… well written after the attack of ” befuddledness” lifted
erwinkennythomas on Oct 20, 2011
tormented! be well!
lovinglyoursjuny on Oct 21, 2011
Well written and illustrated
bluesemotion on Oct 22, 2011
That’s a nice writing Alec , youve got all my sympathy

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