Vividness

Dreamescape on Aug 5, 2010

Tags: active, bright, flashy, poem, Poetry, Proud, rich, vivid, vividness

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I’m vivid.

I’m perfect because I think so.

I’m brilliant because it shows.

I’m rich because I have it.

I’m shining because I glow.

I’m active and energetic,

Flashy and loud.

I’m vivid, I’m vivid, I’m vivid,

I’m proud.

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Comments (9)

TommyP on Aug 5, 2010
YES!!! Shout it out loud! Nice piece… succinct!!
PARAM on Aug 5, 2010
Great share.
heshi ran on Aug 5, 2010
Great one and makes me feel vivid too.
Dreamescape on Aug 5, 2010
Thanks for commenting & reading!!
JakeTeresi on Aug 6, 2010
You must be rich because you’re feeling energetic and vivid, good one!
Dreamescape on Aug 6, 2010
nope, it’s sarcasm…thanks for reading & commenting
Great Idea on Aug 7, 2010
Think about what you’ve read so far. Does it reinforce what you already know about Vividness? Or was there something completely new? What about the remaining paragraphs?
Dreamescape on Aug 7, 2010
Actually anjalina I was just taking the definition and turning it into a poem. Basically, the poem “Vividness” is the meaning of it. Straight to the point, no remaining paragraphs. Thanks for reading & commenting.
Blaze9750 on Aug 13, 2010
I like it.

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