Volumes is a large restaurant and bookshop in Eltham, Victoria. I’ve lived in Eltham for over 20 years. Since its opening in 1999, it has been my “café of choice”. For eight years, Volumes played host to a monthly poetry reading.

Morning
A clutch of new mothers sit
Suckling, and their moony eyes
Cannot disguise the
Pleasure, more gentle than
Orgasm. This drawing out
Of mother’s milky love. For both
The world is this
Mystical transubstantiation.
The word is made
Fluid. The universe entire,
Condensed to this:
a nipple in a rosebud mouth, the suckling
and the milk.
2.
Out on the verandah
An eruption of fourteen year olds
Bolder than any brass you’ve ever seen
Outshine each other
In Clearasilliness. They jostle
In the drawback stakes
(One even blows smoke rings!)
They order lattes with their parents’ money
Sport the latest Nike footwear
Sip life and talk dirty
As if they invented
Love.
And watch, ever cautiously, to see
If anyone is watching them.
3.
Intense as a ringing mobile
Taut as a wire
Eyes flitting from face to watch to doorway
The Real Estate salesman chats personably
Hair VO5d this morning still in place
He is jovial, but hops from foot to foot, wondering
If his next sale is just around the corner.
4.
Lovers sit drinking
each other
staring into cappucinno froth
writing notes to each other from behind their eyes
5.
Some sit, staring into
childhood
Stirring
Emotions thick as mozzarella cheese.
6.
A poet lusts after
books on the shelves.
Longs for a poem to nurture
Wonders how the waiters can bear to smile
And dreams of reading a poem about mothers
Suckling their miracles
One evening at Volumes.

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  • myron lysenko on Feb 15, 2008

    This is a very enjoyable read Barry. I felt like I was sitting beside you taking it all in.

    I love: Clearasilliness. That’s priceless!

    This is a wonderful simile, modern and apt:
    Intense as a ringing mobile

    I’m not sure the next simile should be placed underneath, because it takes away some of the power away from the previous simile:

    Taut as a wire

    I also like this simile very much:

    Emotions thick as mozzarella cheese.

    I’m not sure it’s placed well though. It makes me wonder if the 5th stanza is a little under-developed.

    The poem ends well with the poem lusting over books.

    Thanks mate,
    myron.

  • Poppy on Feb 16, 2008

    I agree with Myron – there are some great lines in this poem which really help to create atmosphere. I was, however, a little put off by the numbering of the stanzas. I feel the poem would work better if it were more linear than structured. (I hope I’m making sense).
    And on Volumes – cheers to our beloved Volumes readings (how I will miss them).

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