The menopause seems to be the rage in me at the moment. So i’m full of those hormones kicking left and right. I thought I’d write another poem about the menopause. Sending a message clear and loud out to all you men out there. We women certainly don’t have it easy! So be gentle with us unpredictable females.

So I’ll take the walk

But I don’t want to take the talk

Because I’m going through the menopause

So I can’t take on another cause

Opps!… I’ve tripped over again

Now those rages sink in!

I know I can’t win!

Wait a minute!…

My hormones have calmed down

Whoops! I think I’ve found my sound

Tick!…Tock!….Tick!…Tock!…

All is sound on the underground

I give  smile to the air

I can feel the breeze run through my hair

It feels wonderful….

Onwards I do roam

I think I’m nearing home

Wait a minute!…

Which way is it!

I think I’ve lost my way!

My head is thinking!…

Thinking!…Thinking!…Thinking!

Here I go again

My head the meopause is shrinking!

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  • papaleng on Jul 19, 2009

    very light with a fluid flow. like it.

  • Milton H Peebles III on Jul 19, 2009

    You may be writing about female menopause, but I know I have felt like this sometimes. This is good write.

    Take Care, DreamSweet and Let Your Heart Shine
    ~ milty

  • sheba on Jul 19, 2009

    Thanks for sharing. Very enjoyable to read!!!

  • George W Whitehead on Jul 19, 2009

    I know that it is a serious subject but this poem is fun, Suzan.

  • California Dreamer on Jul 20, 2009

    A poem well written on women’s feelings during menopause.

  • STEVE666 on Jul 20, 2009

    Well put,Suzan—sounds scary!

  • OhSugar on Jul 22, 2009

    Women will get the ups and downs of life and this is one not so funny part of it. You put a humorous spin on a not humorous subject. I enjoyed reading it.

  • TjRockin on Jul 31, 2009

    nice poem. liked it.

  • Netty net on Aug 30, 2009

    This is good, Have you seen the musical menopause.

  • mrinali on Sep 7, 2009

    nice and well written….

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