A space voided with no color or feelings. A mind with no voice, only pain as it screams, but nobody hears its voice.

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a space
a void
a color
what is it
besides nothing
taking up room
in a lonely place
where there’s no growth
no wicked attraction
no love given or received
no thought spoken
when something is wrong
no voice is heard
as it screams in pain
just waiting
to exhale
in peace

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  • Tiki33 on Oct 24, 2011

    Waiting To Exhale Love the title. I think this poem classify’s as creative expression’s. Thanks for sharing!

  • CHIPMUNK on Oct 25, 2011

    Great write up well expressed

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