Another poem by my grand daughter, "Animal Fairy"

When you are young

you are into all the

little things and say

the funniest things

but when you hit 13 to 59

you’re old enough

to chill down

a lot of people don’t

some that are 28

don’t act their own age

they act like the 

ages of 15 or 18

so to all those people

who don’t act their age

I have something to

tell you

WAKE UP AND GROW UP

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  • ken bultman on Jun 22, 2009

    Oh! You go girl. Tell it like it is. Keep writing.

  • Jenny Heart on Jun 22, 2009

    People do need to act their age. I agree! Like it!

  • nsmukundan on Jun 22, 2009

    YES. people should behave according to their age…my sincere wishes to u…

  • Princess Dre on Jun 22, 2009

    Nice write lady:) Princess

  • Ramalingam on Jun 22, 2009

    Nicely said.There is a saying in Tamil ‘as a man grows, so his knowledge or wisdom should also grow.’If there is no parallel growth, there is bound to be a problem as you said.Thank you

  • Deep Blue on Jun 22, 2009

    Nice lines.

  • amilia snow on Jun 22, 2009

    i don\’t deny that it\’s true that we have to grow up, but once it a while it\’s good to give in to the child inside you…

  • Joie Schmidt on Jun 22, 2009

    Nice work.

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

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