A store you can buy all types of items.

Wal-Mart is a mart

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You can buy all types of items and put it in a cart

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In the store you can throw some darts

because they have the roll back items that make you smart

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The store have a lot of isles to make you forget the part

The next day you construct a new start

This is a Wal-Mart.

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  • CA Johnson on Dec 23, 2009

    This is a really great poem about Wal-Mart. I go there all of the time.

  • Ebedeley on Dec 23, 2009

    There are 2 locations in one Zip code where I live.

  • ken bultman on Dec 23, 2009

    Why is the vest that asks How May I Help You? always walking away from me?

  • alc on Dec 23, 2009

    A great point! Thanks for the share!

  • vb545323 on Dec 23, 2009

    Wal-mart Rocks!

  • 8Shei8 on Dec 23, 2009

    Unfortunately the nearest Walmart is about an hour drive :(

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Dec 23, 2009

    I’m a Walmart Fan…I’ll shop there whenever I can…because I’m a bonifided Walmart Fan !!! :)

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Dec 23, 2009

    I\\\\\\\’m a Walmart Fan…I\\\\\\\’ll shop there whenever I can…because I\\\\\\\’m a bonifided Walmart Fan !!! :)

  • Judy Kaelin on Dec 23, 2009

    It is quite a store.

  • jaysonv on Dec 23, 2009

    wow great post.. one of my friends worked there in Walmart.. Thanks for this post.. Merry Christmas!

  • S M Blomker on Dec 23, 2009

    Wal-mart is a good store.

  • Ruby Hawk on Dec 23, 2009

    Couldn’t do without good ole Wal mart.

  • Eunice Tan on Dec 23, 2009

    Nice store. I hope it will have branch in my country

  • Snooky on Dec 23, 2009

    You ought to send them an advertising invoice

  • John McDonnell on Dec 24, 2009

    i like it!

  • Chris Stonecipher on Dec 24, 2009

    I am a bargain hunter.
    This is an interesting poem. Thanks for sharing.
    Blessings to you,
    Chris

  • SharifaMcFarlane on Dec 24, 2009

    Somebody really likes shopping at walmart! There are none where I am now.

  • Lord Banks on Dec 24, 2009

    Nice words I’m a Tesco man myself as its just around the corner. happy holidays!

  • Reilley on Dec 24, 2009

    I’m sory to say that the only reason Wal-Mart has low prices is because they support slave labor, misogynistic business practices, outsourced manufacturing and NAFTA abuse.

    Did you know that only 5% of the clothing purchased in America is made in America? Wal-Mart is one reason why.

  • Darla Cooke on Dec 24, 2009

    Cute poem!

  • Ramalingam on Dec 24, 2009

    Nice poem on Wal Mart.

  • Atanacio on Dec 24, 2009

    interesting…

  • Shekinah Shazaam on Dec 24, 2009

    I love Walmart! But doesn’t that picture with the “Walmart is anti Women” kind of contradicting with your poem that’s praising the place? o.o

  • thuanynguyen on Dec 24, 2009

    great poem, Ive never been to wall mart before. I’m living in Australia so that’s probably why.

  • ladydryle on Dec 24, 2009

    never been to wal mart too..but still nice poem..

  • Starpisces on Dec 24, 2009

    wow interesting, yah, we don’t have Walmart, but we have a lot of supermarkets..
    Walmart in all parts of US?

  • xoxo on Dec 25, 2009

    Very nice poem. Merry Christmas!

  • iamrulan on Dec 25, 2009

    Excellent. Thank you for sharing.

  • Sir Gunfire on Dec 26, 2009

    YAY!!! YAY!!!! YAY!!!!!!!
    I agree though, Wal-Mart is a mart.

  • Poetic Enigma on Dec 27, 2009

    I like your poem, though I am not a big fan of walmart…lol.
    However; great work on this piece!

  • shikhamj on Dec 28, 2009

    cool nice one..

  • Valerie Curtiss on Dec 30, 2009

    Walmart sucks.. I only go there when there is no other possibility. I hate every dollar they take from me. I hate their policies, their treatment of employees, their corporate crap!

  • lillyrose on Dec 31, 2009

    Great poem sweetie! I have never been to Walmart but I get the picture! Have a fantastic New Year!

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