Comments on: Walking Along the Beach http://authspot.com/poetry/walking-along-the-beach/ Sat, 02 Jun 2012 21:07:42 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.4 hourly 1 By: M Stokes http://authspot.com/poetry/walking-along-the-beach/comment-page-1/#comment-605875 M Stokes Mon, 02 Feb 2009 16:19:54 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/walking-along-the-beach/#comment-605875 wonderful poem so brilliantly written! wonderful poem so brilliantly written!

]]> By: Melissa Ryan http://authspot.com/poetry/walking-along-the-beach/comment-page-1/#comment-605873 Melissa Ryan Mon, 26 Jan 2009 16:32:29 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/walking-along-the-beach/#comment-605873 A beautiful poem. I enjoy visiting the beach. Your poem took me there since I can't be right now. A beautiful poem. I enjoy visiting the beach. Your poem took me there since I can’t be right now.

]]> By: Morgana http://authspot.com/poetry/walking-along-the-beach/comment-page-1/#comment-605871 Morgana Sat, 24 Jan 2009 06:05:12 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/walking-along-the-beach/#comment-605871 So beautiful and warm..love your poetry. So beautiful and warm..love your poetry.

]]> By: eddiego65 http://authspot.com/poetry/walking-along-the-beach/comment-page-1/#comment-605869 eddiego65 Sun, 11 Jan 2009 09:07:49 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/walking-along-the-beach/#comment-605869 Beautiful. I pictured everything and enjoyed my walk in the beach. Beautiful. I pictured everything and enjoyed my walk in the beach.

]]> By: Melody Arcamo Lagrimas http://authspot.com/poetry/walking-along-the-beach/comment-page-1/#comment-605867 Melody Arcamo Lagrimas Sun, 11 Jan 2009 06:36:41 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/walking-along-the-beach/#comment-605867 Thanks you, everyone, for all your comments. I appreciate them a lot, as they are a big factor in helping me improve my writing. Happy New Year to all! Thanks you, everyone, for all your comments. I appreciate them a lot, as they are a big factor in helping me improve my writing. Happy New Year to all!

]]> By: nobert soloria bermosa http://authspot.com/poetry/walking-along-the-beach/comment-page-1/#comment-605865 nobert soloria bermosa Thu, 08 Jan 2009 21:45:59 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/walking-along-the-beach/#comment-605865 you just made me wanna go back to the beach where i used to take a walk every afternoon,thanks for the wonderful read you just made me wanna go back to the beach where i used to take a walk every afternoon,thanks for the wonderful read

]]> By: CHAN LEE PENG http://authspot.com/poetry/walking-along-the-beach/comment-page-1/#comment-605863 CHAN LEE PENG Thu, 08 Jan 2009 16:42:18 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/walking-along-the-beach/#comment-605863 Nice poem, I agree! Nice poem, I agree!

]]> By: Adam Henry Sears http://authspot.com/poetry/walking-along-the-beach/comment-page-1/#comment-605861 Adam Henry Sears Thu, 08 Jan 2009 16:01:05 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/walking-along-the-beach/#comment-605861 I like it a lot. Nice opening. Nice theme.<br /> I think if you put a space between the lines:<br /> "At the wonder of it all<br /> How I wished I could find a way"<br /> and put a period at the end of all, that it would slow the pacing of the free verse and give the separate thoughts more emphasis. Of course, that's just my opinion. Thanks for sharing. I like it a lot. Nice opening. Nice theme.
I think if you put a space between the lines:
“At the wonder of it all
How I wished I could find a way”
and put a period at the end of all, that it would slow the pacing of the free verse and give the separate thoughts more emphasis. Of course, that’s just my opinion. Thanks for sharing.

]]> By: Mys Lyke Meeh http://authspot.com/poetry/walking-along-the-beach/comment-page-1/#comment-605859 Mys Lyke Meeh Thu, 08 Jan 2009 13:19:46 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/walking-along-the-beach/#comment-605859 Nicely written...I liked it! Nicely written…I liked it!

]]> By: Inna Tysoe http://authspot.com/poetry/walking-along-the-beach/comment-page-1/#comment-605857 Inna Tysoe Thu, 08 Jan 2009 09:34:52 +0000 http://authspot.com/poetry/walking-along-the-beach/#comment-605857 That's lovely.<br /> <br /> Thank you,<br /> <br /> Inna That’s lovely.

Thank you,

Inna

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