Walking in The Fog

Darla Smith on Sep 27, 2009

Scary acrostic poem.

Walking in the fog late at night,

Alone in the dark eerie forest.

Listening to the strange sounds,

Knowing evil is lurking nearby.

Immortal demons are chasing me,

Nowhere safe for me to hide.

Growing more scared by the moment.

I see glowing eyes among the trees,

Nocturnal creatures are watching me.

Terror has invaded my peaceful world,

Hunted down by creatures of the night.

Evil vampires are craving my blood.

Forest is shrouded with dense fog,

Otherworldly beasts are hiding within.

Gone are my chances of survival.

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Comments (17)

Andrew121215 on Sep 27, 2009
That’s awesome! Great poem!
David Crerand on Sep 27, 2009
Good job Darla. I love poems about things that go bump in the dark.
ken bultman on Sep 27, 2009
Your acrostics are great.
cardy on Sep 27, 2009
Wow fab work think I would run if I was you grate work.
Sourav on Sep 27, 2009
Very well written… and thoroughly enjoyable!
Milton H Peebles III on Sep 27, 2009
This is good. Should have waited till night to read it.
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petercurtis97 on Sep 27, 2009
A good poem using the image of fog
Goodselfme on Sep 27, 2009
You do these acrostics very well
CA Johnson on Sep 27, 2009
That sounds really scary. You really are good at acrostic poems. I really enjoy them.
Linda Lori on Sep 27, 2009
Well done, Darla!
livemike on Sep 27, 2009
A beginning and end..Full marks…
Melody Arcamo Lagrimas on Sep 27, 2009
Scary and masterfully done.
Ramalingam on Sep 28, 2009
Frightening and awesome.Thank you.
Mr Ghaz on Sep 28, 2009
Enjoyed the poem – very well written. LOVED it!!
Robert Sato on Sep 28, 2009
the hairs on my neck stood up while reading it. very good poem with a great description.
STEVE666 on Sep 28, 2009
Spooky, well written piece, Darla.
CTMHolliday on Oct 1, 2009
I like it.

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