God intended for us to be Naked and Free!

My emotions don’t seem to fit me right

The less I wear the more comfortable I feel

Instilled into me is how we were supposed to be

What God intended for us before they tasted that apple tree

Naked and free

Free of all anger

Less strife and less pain

No hats of stress to sit down on our brains

No optical depression to cover our eyes

No sadness to cover with fake happy lies

Just naked and free

No bitter

No jealous

Those shirts don’t fit me

My pants are too tight

Made of grief, greed, and glee

I’ve covered myself with a coat made of pride

Shoes by confused till I feel satisfied

So I say that I..

I want to be

Free of all lust that makes love feel so bad

Free of all envy that makes me wish I had

Free of all guilt, of all hate and despise

Free of all the emotions that makes me sit and cry

Why…why?

Why can’t we be how God intended us to be

Walking this earth so naked and free

Naked and free

Like God created us to be

Naked and Free…Now that’s wanted nudity   

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  • ceegirl on Jan 23, 2010

    If u do such of thing, it would be a lot of crime. I know God said be naked and free. But he didn’t say be stupid, use comma sense.

  • Darla Cooke on Jan 24, 2010

    Nice poem!

  • LOVELYHONEY on Mar 9, 2010

    Now you know
    Why all people
    Don’t follow God fully
    Nudity wow,
    That’s lovely.
    So what’s next?
    God wanted us to be free
    But mankind has chained all of us
    So dare not talk of nudity
    As God may be angry
    For not following
    The tale of Adam and Eve
    Born totally nude and free
    So don’t lament nor grieve
    For your much desired
    Nudity

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