Warlock

Phoenix Montoya on Oct 23, 2010

Saying goodbye to the ladies man.

Image by Michel Filion

Caught within your spell,

I gazed upon your angel face.

Into your arms, I fell.

How I savored your warm embrace.

Safe as I can be,

within your hold, I will remain.

And we shall both see,

the souls of men in each domain.

Such gloom, you will bear.

My bitterness, you will withstand.

And we shall both hear,

the sufferings of evil men.

Thus hold becomes cold,

your comforting arms into air.

Achingly, you fade,

like the stars in the night, so fair.

A potion into a poison.

Your enchantment, lost.

An illusion, such creation -

death of my warlock!

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Fassy on Oct 23, 2010
NICE ONE GOOD POST
Anj M on Oct 23, 2010
Nice
Kaye TM on Oct 23, 2010
deeply expressed words… =p
krrymarie on Oct 23, 2010
nice dark poem loved it
My World on Oct 23, 2010
Thanks for share.
PSingh1990 on Oct 23, 2010
Nice Share.
giftarist on Oct 23, 2010
Awesome masterpiece, friend. Liked it!
CA Johnson on Oct 23, 2010
I loved it. I enjoy the fact that you have a theme going on with your poems. That really helps set them apart from other poems. You did a great job. I was not sure what I was expecting from the title of your poem, but I really did enjoy reading it.
papaleng on Oct 24, 2010
Bye..bye Warlock. well-penned and with great thoughts! makata ka talaga.
BC Doan on Oct 25, 2010
You’re good, Phoenix..I enjoy this poem very much! Yes, good bye Warlock..
yes me on Oct 30, 2010
Liked this one cheers
CHAN LEE PENG on Nov 17, 2010
Good imagination and beautiful plot. Thanks, phoenix..kabbayan..

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