The first memory I have that is really clear.

Warm, dappled sunlight, filtered through bean plants,
Soft rag doll, so tattered and loved stuck in my pants,
Mommy all large and loving, stretching in the sun
A little sister or brother waiting to come,
Two years old, a memory made by me,
A house, a garden, a cat, a dog, the sea,
When brothers were part of a fun day,
When father came home and still held sway,
When Fairies were real
When People could feel
I’d give any amount of money to recapture the day
When warm dappled light through bean plants did play.

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  • Alicia Wind on Feb 21, 2009

    You just created a perfect family through this piece…it’s awesome to feel the warm from immediate family, really!

  • Christine Ramsay on Feb 21, 2009

    That is so lovely and brings back many of my childhood memories.

    Christine

  • jane eisenberg on Feb 21, 2009

    this is really good; the rhyme skeme fits perfectly.

    :]

  • Joni Keith on Feb 21, 2009

    This is a masterpiece. The joy of childhood in all it’s simplicity.

  • Daisy Peasblossom on Feb 21, 2009

    What a beautiful picture! I can almost smell the earth in the garden, contrasting with the sharp scent of the ocean. This is always yours; it and fairies are in that hidden world we almost glimpse out of the corner of our eye. We just have to believe it is there.

  • Lee Altman on Feb 21, 2009

    Great Stuff

  • postpunkpixie on Feb 21, 2009

    That was absolutely beautiful. I feel like I was there.

  • keyella on Feb 21, 2009

    Felt as though youd gone back in time and written a picture in pen

  • Doug Rasmussen on Feb 21, 2009

    I don’t see how something so short can be so damn emotional and profound. That was like a little short film in my mind. Since I know your mother- I adored that visual of Theresa- and Eve, and Tom, and John- and yes, your father. It put a lump in me throat. Perfect. Thank you for sharing that bit of your life that even I never heard. I can learn a lot from this one.
    I love ya!
    -Doogie

  • denus on Feb 21, 2009

    very touching.

  • rutherfranc on Feb 21, 2009

    everybody has a wish inside of them that wants to go back to those innocent days, thank you for shouting it out in beautiful words..

  • miraj on Feb 22, 2009

    Hi,

    We all miss those golden days don’t we?thanks for taking the trip down memory lane and giving us images of those evergreen days.

    my deepest respect and gratitude,Annie
    LOVE IS ALL

    Walk in beauty change the world.

  • hfj on Feb 22, 2009

    Beautiful words paints beautiful picture. No one truely knows just how far someone can remember back. You mentioned in this piece that you were two. Everyone differs in this area, but i think i was also two when i first remembered an event that happened in my life. You captured the moment beautifully with you’re words and detail. Well done.

  • Ben donovan on Feb 22, 2009

    Save your money you already captured it.

  • Morgana on Feb 24, 2009

    Beautiful…but who says you can’t believe in fairies? I still do :)

  • Mexica0divina on Feb 24, 2009

    Wow, this was full of imagery and meaning. Perfectly drawn emotions, I love it! I would look at how the very last line is worded though, play around with it a little.

  • Vikram Chhabra on Feb 24, 2009

    This is a wonderful piece of work. Brought back the innocence of infancy!!

  • Kate Smedley on Feb 25, 2009

    Lovely nostalgic poem

  • Mona Kennedy on Mar 5, 2009

    You share much feeling. Yes! Life is wonderful.

  • julianhw on Mar 10, 2009

    This paints a great picture.

  • MrZebra84 on Mar 26, 2009

    This is gorgeous!!! You bring such vivid images to mind with your work.

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