The intense love carried deep within a warrior’s heart.

Across the lifetimes,
My heart has called,
My spirit reaching out,
To my loved one,
To whom I belong,
Through heat of battle,
You have always calmed,
The raging fires within,
With your love song,
This burning desire,
It is so strong,
My heart is pounding,
I think of you,
As I run along,
I call your name,
You feel my pain,
Like rolling thunder,
Your image remains,
The war drums beckon,
They call my name,
Like my brothers before me,
I will stand alone,
And once I have fallen,
The wings of the eagles,
Will carry me home,

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Comments (13)
  • Jasin on Dec 28, 2008

    Wonderfully done.

  • MJPatrick on Dec 28, 2008

    Fantastic!

  • Liane Schmidt on Dec 28, 2008

    Absolutely beautiful* – wonderful work*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Mystical_Whitewolf on Dec 29, 2008

    Love this one as well, you have written so many wonderful poems.
    I can not wait to see what you do next.
    You should write some more of your short stories as well, many would really enjoy reading those again too.

  • annamaria on Jan 3, 2009

    I like this one as the others … you make me dream and feel deep emotions ! thanks

  • Unofre Pili on Jan 3, 2009

    This is really beautiful.

  • Lauren Axelrod on Jan 4, 2009

    This was really incredible. I could imagine the imagery with open eyes and open hearts. Well done!

  • Chris Stonecipher on Jan 7, 2009

    I am glad I found your work. This is impressive. I will share this at Stumbleupon.

  • eddiego65 on Jan 8, 2009

    Incredible work. Beautiful!

  • Debra. on Jan 15, 2009

    Another lovely piece! Your work is such a blessing!

    God bless.

  • spiritwalker on Jan 18, 2009

    You are one of the naturally gifted..do not foresake this gift.

  • The Quail on Jan 18, 2009

    Thank you to all you my good friends that encourage and supprt my articles. You my new friend Spiritwalker honor me the last of our kind with your presence,I am humbled by your words.Aho

  • RJ Chamberlain on Mar 9, 2009

    Powerful Quail.

    RJ

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