Limerick.

Erotic the music he chose
Her spouse danced while stripping his clothes
He’s cute as a pup
He even cooked sup
So why she threw-up heaven knows

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  • drabiakhan on Aug 4, 2012

    Awww.

  • jennifer eiffel01 on Aug 4, 2012

    Very nice!

  • jennifer eiffel01 on Aug 4, 2012

    Very nice

  • smokychristine on Aug 4, 2012

    Goodness, what a surprise ending

  • Jswana on Aug 4, 2012

    Ha, ha. That was cute.:)

  • dreamzstar23 on Aug 5, 2012

    How nice..!!

  • sabanawaz on Aug 5, 2012

    lovely share

  • sabanawaz on Aug 5, 2012

    lovely share……

  • mishee on Aug 5, 2012

    nice share.

  • observer1 on Aug 5, 2012

    interesting story . . .

  • stevetheblogger on Aug 5, 2012

    Martin what a great article to wake up to
    Best Wishes
    stevetheblogger

  • Margaret Boseroy on Aug 5, 2012

    Aww…poor guy!

  • Derdriu on Aug 6, 2012

    Martin, The best-formulated plans sometimes, serendipitously go awry.
    Respectfully, and with many thanks for sharing, Derdriu

  • Secre22 on Aug 7, 2012

    Lol!

  • Tiki33 on Aug 7, 2012

    A bit flirty with this piece.

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