A little advice.

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With the blink of an eye we will all be gone

Most of us here with nothing done

Time spent living an empty life

Afraid to move from a hidden strife

Time passes quickly as we move on

Time passes slowly as we pause apon

Life is to be lived and not just exist from day to day

We must express ourselves in our own unique way

use all of your senses that was given to you

feed them with the things they are supposed to do

so leave the addictions and the depressions of the mind

Be kind to yourself and stop wasting time..

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  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 6, 2009

    I will try to follow..

  • PhoenixRox on Nov 6, 2009

    Wonderful poem Mike.So true.I love it when you say feed all your senses.God bless!

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 6, 2009

    Very nice poem.

  • Linda Lori on Nov 6, 2009

    Very nice!

  • Jane Benitez on Nov 6, 2009

    The older I get the more I realize how important it is to take time for myself – great message in your poem. Well done!

  • Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 7, 2009

    thought provoking… n true to the point….gud 1.

  • prettybre on Nov 7, 2009

    i like this one to yeah.mike

  • giftarist on Nov 7, 2009

    Powerful message..Very moving! Thanks for sharing!

  • LoveDoctor on Nov 10, 2009

    powerful! I like this one. leave the depression and addictions of your mind. and of course stop wasting time.

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 10, 2009

    Your words are true, We should make the most of the time we have.

  • girlnextdoor on Nov 12, 2009

    Very thougt provoking and intense write thanks for sharing…

  • LoveDoctor on Jan 13, 2010

    Excellent and very true. The mind is a terrible thing to waste. And since the mind is so powerful, we must Not allow our thoughts of negativity or defeat to control us. Somtimes people become fearful and as a result, they don’t accept challenges and become stuck. Full of doubts and worries, they remain in this bubble scared of doing anything with their lives and then they become old and realized that time did slip by. And then it might be too late and they are faced with all these regrets wondering why they didn’t do it before.

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