Watch Your Mouth a poem by Jennifer Jo Fay. A poem for writers who give feedback, be careful how you treat your writer peers. Don’t practice being hurtful.

Watch your Mouth

A note to The Tick,

watch your mouth.

People really need to think

before blurting out your words.

“Don’t worry, your work is low

quality and Triond would have to

pay a publisher to sell your stuff.”

Tick was rude.  Perhaps even

jealous and ticked would sum it up.

Of course the two poems he read

weren’t of substance.

I didn’t mean them to be.

And this one won’t be of substance

either.

I’m not intending this one to be

substance either.

I am just writing this one to state

a fact.

Writers need to try to keep

their mouths shut if they have

nothing good to say.

And if you intend to criticize,

be nice about it and give tips

and stress what some of the good

points are.  No need to get nasty.

Who is to say that Tick is a terrible writer.

He is just one opinion.

This writing community needs to

keep good face

and keep up a friendly manner.

And Triond’s Nasty Rumors and Rumors

poems were just poems I wrote

about what I had heard from another writer.

And he heard it from someone else.

We really have no facts about

the idea of Triond selling our stuff to publishers.

I was just stressing a concern

about what might have happened.

If it wasn’t Triond,

it could have been someone else

who stole someone’s stuff and sold it.

We don’t know.

A rumor is spreading.

So until I hear back from Triond

about the matter,

I will not write any poem

of substance.

Once again, this isn’t a substance poem.

I could care less about this one.

I am just raising some points

to other writers.

Be kind, rewind and if there’s nothing

good to say, keep it to yourself.

We don’t need to hear

someone telling us

that our stuff is low quality

and crap.

Not neccessary.

Jennifer Jo Fay

copyrighted February 6, 2012

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  • avissado on Feb 6, 2012

    point well presented!

  • jfay1995 on Feb 15, 2012

    My last words to The Tick. I could care less what he thinks. I do listen to most people and try to improve my writing, and find it helpful when they stress the good points and the bad, but all Tick seems to care about writing about is that I suck at poetry. Which in my mind is a difference of opinion. And no I’m not going to go read T.s. Hardy or whoever who is about rhyming. I’m not about rhyming. But yes, reading some poetry is a good idea. But as far as I’m concerned, if you have nothing good to say, then you better not say it.

    Writers don’t want to hear all the bad crap all the time.

    So one more word to The Tick. Don’t come back and read my stuff. Go shove it.

    But I will listen to criticism from other people.

  • ittech on Feb 19, 2012

    Very interesting. Thanks for sharing another great article.

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