The title speaks for itself!

Watching-
from afar.
Each blink, a sketching
on canvas.  A scar
on the mind,
if thoughts are the same?

If whilst further behind
and the tables were turned.
O’ how the stomach has churned,
toward the same movement
that may have occurred.

Every single blemish
of the skin sketched.
Even though more than
a stones throw away, they can be etched.

Admired from afar,
learning more and more every second.
The heart will soar,
as if it could call upon thy beckoned.
And rip a hole in the skin.

Nowhere near are
feelings wearing thin.

Watched from afar.

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Comments (11)
  • cutedrishti8 on Oct 23, 2009

    A lovel poem to read…

  • johnnydod on Oct 23, 2009

    O’ Emma you continue to please my waiting eyes with your inscriptions.
    you put so much into each piece I feel honoured to be allowed to feast upon your work

  • ken bultman on Oct 23, 2009

    Wouldn\’t it be wonderfully ironic if the other party was also watching from afar. Perhaps the twain shall meet.

  • raman13 on Oct 23, 2009

    verygood

  • raman13 on Oct 23, 2009

    excllent

  • Payge on Oct 23, 2009

    Very well done and well writen,I liked it.

  • Lee Ness on Oct 23, 2009

    I like this piece alot. Love the title. You are very good with descriptive words and points in the poem.
    Lee Ness

  • larry84 on Oct 23, 2009

    Trapping my soul into a do or die situation when it comes to reading your articles they are EXCELLENT!!

  • alc on Oct 23, 2009

    Emma you never seem to amaze me with any of your writing!

  • Darla Cooke on Oct 23, 2009

    Lovely poem.

  • Sourav on Oct 23, 2009

    Wonderful write again!

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