Written from the perspective of a prisoner being tortured and, ultimately, killed by water.

Long have I laid here staring into the sky,
Water dripping, drip by drip, I think I’d rather die.

I see the drop forming into a tear.
Another drip drops upon my forehead.
Another drop worst than my worst fear.
I think I’d rather have bled.

Captive on the ground until my will breaks,
But shall not; only raises the stakes.

My fortitude, a slap in my captors face,
Incites their anger to insanity.
The loss of my life, a stubborn disgrace.
I’ll gladly go with my vanity.

Once life-giving, now torturous water surrounding my head.
Only a few more moments of twitching and jerking and I’ll be dead.

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  • Marie Milton on Aug 18, 2010

    Hm, I’m starting to wonder which sign your progressed moon is. Don’t worry if you don’t quite get it, it’s astrological talk :)
    Because of all these poems, it’s go me thinking ;) )…

    Oh, sorry, the poems great! by the way :)

  • s j tubrazy on Aug 21, 2010

    good poem

  • miraj on Aug 26, 2010

    my god this is shocking.very similar with the chinese way of torturing with water,where they make a man bald,ties him to a tree,and let water fall drop by drop on his head,so it feels like a hammer.

  • Bo Russo on Aug 26, 2010

    I’m wondering what you are thinking about.

  • Butterfly Musings on Aug 26, 2010

    magnificent, imagery and flow

    your poetry has a very strong presence to it.

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