“Uninhibited, uncluttered,

unsullied, uncomplicated”

Sounds like heaven to me! Love the image.

good one

A good poem this is. Your diction woks well here, and the divition of your stanzas makes this poem a two-stanza poem. The beginning is well-written as well as the end.

Keep it up!

Please, check some of my stuff on the site; you might come out liking some of it.

Lovely poem, lovely picture… Thank you, Alec.

Good poem and a lovely .gif image.

OOhh! Alec this one is delicious………makes me want to be a kid again, which doesn’t happen very often. bad dark meemories there……….a gem, a beauty…..

Lovely poem and pic!

Lovely animated image and a great piece of write too…

This is wonderful !!!

Lovely Alec..light-hearted…Thank you

….released to play! Something we all need and forget to
give ourselves permission to do. Well done.

A wonderful, playful, and uplifting poem Alec! It brings a smile!

Very light and playful piece. Beautifully capture through words and pic!

An image such as that would spark an inspiration such as you catchy poem in two parts. Very nice…easy to read.

What a grand, fun read! I love the pic, too.

Playful imagery and lovely word choice too Alec, plus, I love the picture!

I love this, Alec! How fun to find the child within, even if only momentarily. But, we can return, again and again…

Great stuff Alec!

Nice. I think we all have a little bit of the kid we used to be.