Standing on a suburban front doorstep at night, remembering home…

When I close my eyes I see
sparkles dancing on the wave tops
bringing starlight down to earth
in winking harmony with wind,
on the waters in the night.

When I close my eyes I hear
whispered chuckles on the shoreline
giving voices to the lake,
a languid melody that flows
from the waters in the night.

When I close my eyes I feel
feather breezes through the woodland
soothing wrinkles off my brow
in restful holiday from doubt
near the waters in the night

When I close my eyes I smell
smoke of Autumn leaves enkindled
burning deep in my recall,
a pleasant reverie of scent
crossing waters in the night

When I close my eyes I’m home
senses reaching back to capture
missing pieces of a place
in loving memory of woods,
and the waters in the night

Casey Mack (2001)

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  • qasimdharamsy on Jul 21, 2010

    nice one dear..

  • papaleng on Jul 21, 2010

    good story.

  • Roberta J. Morrison on Jul 21, 2010

    Very touching, Casey. There’s no place like that special home in our hearts–it will always be there–it can’t be taken away.

  • Katie Marie on Jul 21, 2010

    I see…I hear…I feel…I smell…I am…home. What beautiful lines to bring in all the senses that are a part of the memory. Beautifully done.

  • cafftee on Jul 21, 2010

    Its not that often I’m moved to read something more than once, but this ticked that box for me. Very nicely done, loved it.

  • Linda Lori on Jul 21, 2010

    I love this! Excellent write! :)

  • Cinderella Can Dream on Jul 23, 2010

    It was beautiful!!!! It IS home, and I miss it too!

  • alxymy on Jul 23, 2010

    I was amazed very nice selection. I found it quite moving.

  • stryka66 on Jul 28, 2010

    Excellent piece

  • Joie Schmidt on Aug 5, 2010

    So lovely!

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Joie Schmidt.

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