A poem about good intentions sometimes squandered. A chronicle of imperfect plans.

Just when you think the gain of the golden,

Glorious dawn has begun

You must run back in; depart and back into the desperate dark

and

When the horizon of hope lies just beyond the setting Sun

You must run back into the dark and instruct the heart to not despair

when

The future seems lost, or the cost too high; too stark

Because when the time to find your way has again gotten under way

You must run back in; depart and into the desperate dark rescind

Worry not;

It is only momentary, but not forever

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  • LOVELYHONEY on Dec 6, 2010

    When the horizon of hope lies just beyond the setting Sun

    THIS LINE IS SO LOVELY
    WILL YOU PERMIT ME TO STEAL IT!

    the horizons of eternity
    i always wondered lay
    beyond
    the horizon of hope beyond the setting sun
    as you now say
    but i’d rather disolay
    the horizon’s of sons
    still far way
    in the garbage bins of time
    shall thence emerge some day
    if time stands of its own
    and has any say
    then symbols of joyous hopes
    i too sahll display

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Dec 6, 2010

    Of course L.H. :-)

  • Jane Campbell on Dec 6, 2010

    lovely..Jerry

  • xyz999 on Dec 6, 2010

    A nice one. Enjoyable reading!

  • Mystical Whitewolf on Dec 7, 2010

    Nice poem, it reminds one not to give up hope.

  • LadyElena on Dec 7, 2010

    Lovely Poem – Lets hope nothing blocks our blessings from manifesting.

  • T. S. Lewis on Dec 7, 2010

    Love the metaphors

  • yes me on Dec 7, 2010

    Liked this cheers

  • Freethinking on Dec 7, 2010

    Well put words and thoughts.

  • Adrn0919 on Dec 7, 2010

    Very nicely written. Adrian

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Dec 8, 2010

    This is me expressing my appreciation.

    Consider yourself appreciated.

  • lillyrose on Dec 8, 2010

    Lots to mull over after reading this poem, seems life’s struggles do make us hesitate when we should be bold and just go forward.

  • sandcastle on Dec 10, 2010

    Love it!

  • Jerry Bradford aka Jerry Atrixx on Dec 11, 2010

    Thanks Lilly and Sandcastle!

  • Kaye TM on Dec 11, 2010

    liked it!

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