Part of the Pithom series…

We; the manifestation
We; the introspective reflection are living completion
Till perfection

We belong to the stars; were formed by the light whilst in darkness
Awaiting the return

Its materialisation is in confirmation of all that we have learned
In the understanding of self;
We become our thoughts

Peer now and consider your self beyond the seeing, before your illumination
For surely you shall find the power to conquer your mind
And thus attain the greater freedom
You must question all that is known without assuming the answers (not take what is given)
Or remain silent
For the Sun is no friend to a barren and uncreative wilderness
And without the purified air; the cleansing waters, fruition surely fails
And the mind is lost

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  • TroostAvenue on Nov 26, 2009

    Again, I’m not sure I want to think that hard, I guess it’s just too far beyond my experince.

  • aunslaught on Nov 27, 2009

    great choice of words

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 27, 2009

    Very deep and probably beyond a lot of people’s power, but if you could see beyond your mind, and never accept without questioning, you might have a better understanding of what you are. An amazing write as always.

    Christine

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