Learn to be giving, and shed your light of love.

Learn to be non-judgemental

of every life form that exists,

here or anywhere in this entire cosmos.

Rise above petty and materialistic things.

Learn to be giving,

and shed your light of love.

Make it a rule, never to hurt

or play with any ones feelings, not matter what;

For underneath all this,

We are all in fact the same and equal.

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  • babygirl3605 on Jun 6, 2010

    Good job

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Jun 6, 2010

    Guess you are right my friend.

  • Joie Schmidt on Jun 6, 2010

    Very lovely – one <3.

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Joie Schmidt.

  • Chryslis on Jun 6, 2010

    Bottom line.

  • ceegirl on Jun 6, 2010

    It’s a lot of people don’t see it equal. You said it all.

  • giftarist on Jun 6, 2010

    You’re right.

  • VTech on Jun 6, 2010

    Good Post

  • Uma Shankari on Jun 6, 2010

    Well said.

  • Vaibhav Diwaker on Jun 7, 2010

    That’s a nice one……..loved it………

  • sara20 on Jun 9, 2010

    Excellent manner and very well-written sentence is doing, with useful information includes a good things you have in your article.

    Thanks and cheers.
    Sara

  • CA Johnson on Jun 14, 2010

    This is a great poem. I love the meaning behind the poem. We should treat people with respect especially if we want it in return.

  • Nikita K on Jun 26, 2010

    Your morals and ethics are so clearly expressed in this poem, it’s beautifully written… The poem pretty much sums up the phrase “life is like a mirror”.

  • CC23 on Jul 20, 2010

    That is right. People must read this to be reoriented. =)

  • wonder on Sep 21, 2010

    A great and inspiring poem.You are versatile, stories,poems…

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