American, yet we still judge!!!

 

 

We are America,
Home of the free.
Land of the brave,
Or suppose to be !!
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Then why are we judged,
By the color of our skin?
What we have or don’t have,
Or the houses we live in!!
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There are some to rich,
There are some too poor?
Why can’t we help each other,
I’m really not sure.
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We’re the land of opportunity,
At least that’s what they say.
But jobs are hard to find,
They’ve all been taken away.
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We are judged,
By the shape that we’re in.
Some are too fat,
Some are too thin.
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They say we are equal here,
But that’s something I don’t see.
Yes we’re the Land of the brave,
The home of the free.

~Collette~
©Copyright 03-31-02

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  • ken bultman on Aug 12, 2009

    We see others as our folks saw them–it’s ingrained. We have to change ourselves. Equality is just a word like freedom or justice. If it isn’t applied it’s meaningless.

  • ashan1614 on Aug 12, 2009

    It’s true, we have a long way to go here in America. It will have to start with each individual being determined to make things different.

  • RS Wing on Aug 12, 2009

    Great poem. Too bad our government perpetuates these wrongs with the inability to shake off the pervasive racism that poisons our waters and the worst waters to poison are our youths fountain. Without a clear message….it will not stop. We have elected a great man for Prez, let’s let him do his work and not turn everything he does into a political quagmyre of digust. 8 years of failure is a tough one to tackle and you can’t right the wrongs in just 200 days…it’s going to take a bit of time. Let’s give him that time instead of the same old republican idealogues which got us in this mess from the get go. Great message Collette!

  • alc on Aug 12, 2009

    This is very true and I’m glad that you decided to write on this topic!!! It’s is well put together and makes some very important points in the economy today!!!

  • George W Whitehead on Aug 12, 2009

    This poem rings true in every country in the developed world.

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