A short piece about the way lovers should be – willing to go as far as it takes for each other.

Believe me not when I say to you,
I’ve never learnt to love,
Because every time you spoke to me,
I could never return enough.

Please tell me you dreams, my Love,
I shall help you through,
No obstacle shall slow us down,
Success is all we know.

We cannot afford to fail, my Love,
Since we’ve gotten thus far,
There’s nothing that can stop us now,
To reach the highest star.

Believe me now when I say, my Love,
You’ve taught me all I know,
Should you wish to reach the stars,
The together we will go.

© Marie Milton

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  • alc on Aug 31, 2009

    A truly lovely write! Thanks for sharing!

  • Francy on Aug 31, 2009

    this is great
    keep sharing

  • maranatha on Aug 31, 2009

    Beautiful!

  • Darla Cooke on Aug 31, 2009

    Lovely poem!

  • Emma Green on Aug 31, 2009

    A truly beautiful poem, i loved it!

  • STEVE666 on Aug 31, 2009

    I enjoyed this—well done!

  • BullwinkleMuse on Aug 31, 2009

    I especially liked the last stanza. All of it, though, was so well done, nicely expressed.

  • AngelicaRaene on Aug 31, 2009

    absolutely gorgeous poem, marie!

  • teddybear55 on Aug 31, 2009

    I loved the poem, Marie. It was beautiful.

  • Jenny Heart on Aug 31, 2009

    Fabulous! Love it!

  • giftarist on Aug 31, 2009

    Good work puffin..^_^
    Liked it

  • Born to be Free on Sep 3, 2009

    …And to the stars you shall go : )
    Your work is truely profound.

  • raptor22 on Sep 4, 2009

    I like it!

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