First I felt lulled by the snow and then I felt the reality and dangers that snow brings. Very nice poem.

Thanks Morgana.

Though I haven’t seen a snow ever in my life but you clearly described the hazards of encountering one.

I just now learned how to find you. This is the first comment I have ever posted at this site. Guess it did not take too long to learn.

I love the way your poem reads and seeing its shape. I also enjoy writing poetry and making them symmetrical, too.

Your poem reminded me about what happened today. My cat became very excited. So much so that he was almost flying. I asked him what he was so excited about. He led me into the sunroom and looked out the window. I looked out also and saw big puffy snowflakes coming down. My cat always gets very excited over them, and he usually wants me to see them, too.

Nice meeting you.

beautifully written piece of poetry,

Very unique and cleverly crafted. I enjoyed this smart piece.
God bless, Adam.

Thanks everyone. This poem is actually based on a true story.

A beautiful poem.

I love it.

Thank you.

Very nice poem! The story is touching.

Well… aren’t you Mr. Popularity, already. Look what happens when I leave for a few days! j/k

Well done! I’m pleased to find a new poet that I can appreciate. Oh, wait. You found me first!

A beautiful piece.

-M

Very good, Adam! The fact that it’s a personal story makes it even better. Congrats.

It’s not really a personal story, just based on a true story.

I love the way this poem is written, both in the shape of it and in the metaphors used. I have written one called ‘Snowstorm’ which is quite different but which you might like to read.

Christine

I liked this. Thanks!

i loved the flow of this one. good work!