A poem of how one can change just like the weather.

As the weather gets colder

And my eyes grow older

I can tell you one thing

I can no longer sing

As these strangers walk past me

And the fog’s too thick to see

My mind lingers on one thought

And that’s the silence you brought

When you left for something better

It’s getting harder to remember

I just hope it was worth it

Because I don’t want to forget

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Comments (9)
  • Pattie on Jan 27, 2012

    The way you compare everything to the weather makes it sound magical

  • Matt on Jan 29, 2012

    I think this is really cute

  • Miranda on Jan 31, 2012

    Quite beautiful

  • Justin on Feb 3, 2012

    Great work

  • Sandra on Feb 7, 2012

    really good

  • Axel on Feb 9, 2012

    Beautiful

  • Rodney on Feb 18, 2012

    I always seem to change with the weather

  • Allyson on Feb 25, 2012

    Awesome

  • Tim on Mar 23, 2012

    Wonderfully written

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