The next installment in the soap opera that has become my life….

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This is no longer a safe place for me to be

A tornado of lies swirls around my head

A whirlpool of distrust at my feet

Both threatening to suck me in

And things are being tossed about

Sharp things that could cut deeply

The sail is rent, tattered, shredded

There is no way we can use it

To go in any direction from here

I don’t know why I let you convince me

To stay aboard as long as I have

You said we were in this together

But it is painfully apparent that

You don’t want any assistance from me

It’s almost as though you were intent

On sinking the ship all along

Drilling tiny holes in her hull

Even as I was trying to bail

Trying to save us both

In the distance I can see another vessel

One that appears strong and safe

One that could carry me off

To somewhere warm and dry

I am nearly ready to jump ship

I am a strong swimmer

Evident in the fact

That I have not drowned already

I’m convinced I can make it there

But it seems there is only room

On board for one of us

Besides, you always made sure

To remind me endlessly

That you are indeed the captain

Commanding the helm, plotting the course

Well, Captain, now you must make

The ultimate sacrifice – For once

Bear the responsibility of your position

And go down with your ship

 

 © 2009 – Andrea J. Shannon

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http://authspot.com/poetry/weather-the-storm/

http://authspot.com/poetry/weather-the-storm-part-two/

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  • ken bultman on Oct 8, 2009

    I’ll sail my ship alone though all the sails are torn and when it starts to sink then I’ll blame you..–Moon Mulligan, circa 1948.

  • ashan1614 on Oct 8, 2009

    Sounds like someone else I know. :) I’m sure I’ll be blamed as well.

  • Shawn O on Oct 8, 2009

    Such a great write. I really like this poem. You are very talented. :)

  • Jenny Heart on Oct 8, 2009

    Very talented indeed!

  • emmahaynes on Oct 9, 2009

    I love all your stuff, you’re so good at it, hope I’m half as good as you in later life :)

  • emmahaynes on Oct 9, 2009

    Ooh I meant later in my life…not implying you’re old! Sorry!

  • ashan1614 on Oct 10, 2009

    Emma, LOL! I am older than I look, but I knew what you meant. No offense taken. :)

  • babyjingles1231 on Oct 12, 2009

    I liked it :P

  • Aldrin A Wilding West on Oct 26, 2009

    Seems to me that one too many squawls would question anyone’s resolve. Two too many, and you question your own sanity for staying aboard. Three too many, and the option of staying fades beyond recognition. Not sure how many squawls you’ve been through. Lots it seems. Has the Captain of the good ship Greener Over There mown his lawn? Does he doff his cap and beckon you thence? Decisions……

  • neopisiva on Jun 21, 2011

    Oh,the power of nature!

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