I promised my faithful readers that I would keep them posted on this story. So this is the newest installment. It’s really not looking too promising….

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A cloud of suspicion looms overhead

The wind has picked up

But not enough to cover your tracks

If that’s what you were hoping for

And in its wake, the stench of deceit

I did not have to search very far

To discover the source of the odor

Why is it that we cannot keep

Our ship out of the choppy waters?

Didn’t we agree not to take this course again?

If we manned the helm together

We could steer a straight path

But you seem to want to do things

Your own way – disregard me

And want me to sit, docile, by your side

While you dash our vessel upon the rocks

Did you never hear the old saying

What’s good for the goose

Is good for the gander

I want control of my own destiny

I’m responsible for my own happiness

I will not let you destroy it

With your careless attempts to pilot the ship

By your own self-serving rules

The waves are breaking over the bow

It won’t be much longer

Before the boat capsizes

But I have my life jacket at the ready

I hope you have one also

 

 

 © 2009 – Andrea J. Shannon

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  • Shamanz on Sep 21, 2009

    I found this piece a short and a fun read. Like the imagery like “Choppy waters” or like “cloud of suspcision looms over head”

    Nicely done!

  • ceegirl on Sep 21, 2009

    thanks for keeping us up dated

  • Rajesh Kumar Ram on Sep 22, 2009

    nice one…we should always have the life jacket ready..never take things fro granted! i too have mine on always!

  • Aldrin A Wilding West on Sep 22, 2009

    I hope I can be at least a broken plank for support should the shipwreck happen. If it doesn’t, all well and good, but I offer my buoyancy for what it’s worth..

  • emmahaynes on Sep 23, 2009

    Thanks for the great update :)

  • diamondpoet on Sep 28, 2009

    Okay so you know that rocked, you know that you are a extrodinary poet. I have got to take some time out to learn how to insert pictures with my work.

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