A painful reminder of what happens in relationships when those involved haven’t learned how to constructively resolve conflict. (OUCH!)

A gentle breeze blows thoughts of you

Through my mind – I smile

But in the distance, a dark cloud approaches

And the rain will wash it all away

If only we’d taken the time to learn

How to weather the storms

And navigate the angry seas

Together, helping each other

Instead of drifting apart

What will become of us

When the strained ties that bind

Us together finally reach their

BREAKING POINT????

Will we be able to use the good times

To carry us through the bad?

For now I let the beauty of the day

Remind me of pleasant moments

But beware; the storm approaches

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  • lh on Jul 28, 2009

    its the storm which weathers me today

  • ashan1614 on Jul 29, 2009

    I understand. Sometimes we are tossed about by the angry sea.

  • kizichat on Jul 31, 2009

    learning is lifelong and even in the storm we learn, and i agree its wise to prepare ahead. great peice ashan.

  • ashan1614 on Jul 31, 2009

    I agree, kizichat. Our trials only come to make us strong.

  • daring104 on Jul 31, 2009

    Very nice. I would definitely want to know when the storm comes and the outcome. Will you make it or will you break apart? :)

  • Sonia Doreen on Aug 2, 2009

    Another great poem Ashan..the storm approaching, beautiful!

  • Collette Edwards on Aug 2, 2009

    Ashan, well written, This is very sad a break-up is never easy butsometimes the storms in our lives are just to strong. Keep them coming you are very talented :)

  • Ruby Hawk on Aug 2, 2009

    We have good times and bad times. It’s life and it continues on. Well said.

  • spoiledhoops11 on Aug 20, 2009

    well put article. Im interested in what happens. I really liked this article. Keep them coming.

  • Sourav on Oct 8, 2009

    Beautiful poem! Lovely!

  • CA Johnson on Dec 7, 2009

    This is another great one. Relationships can be stormy at times.

  • Christine Ramsay on Dec 23, 2009

    A very good poem. You have to take the ups with the downs. That is the only way a relationship will succeed.

    Christine

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