Love making is better when it starts in the mind and takes your body to a place in your dreams. Enjoy the elevator music.

The sheet slightly uncovered the

sensitive part of his chest.

An oscillating wind blew coolly, hardening

she tasted the center, pressing

skin bewteen enamel. A ripple

moved throughout his body

flexing quads tensely

sensory endings connected

toes to nipple, arching.

Her hand followed a

wavy motion. Her gentle

bite created repeated ripples

flowing along his abs

leading her to a marble structure,

wrapping her hand soothingly

stroking, mystified how

gods can create the perfect

sculpture. Proportioned  

his shape did not diminish with age or

decrees hiding nudity  

his stature an art form she

desired to study. Feeling the

ripple return, a warm

trickle rinsed down her hand.

She took him to the brink and

paused before ecstasy.

Eager to return the favor, he

slid stonework with

lubricated ease.

Naturally pliable, she accepted the

bend, tip and base with little resistance. It

was her turn to enjoy the ripple effects

of pleasure as he pressed

against her sensitive spot firm, 

methodical, coordinating

rhythm with thrust and digit

desperately trying to reach an

elevated state, but her pelvis

pressed down, as if she did

not want to go, so he

pushed up harder, raising

her above previous thresholds. Shifting

mind with space busting 

barriers, arriving at a place

she always wanted to visit.

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Comments (13)
  • Shamyl on Apr 19, 2010

    Arousing poetry. Brilliantly composed. Good job!!

  • Christine Ramsay on Apr 19, 2010

    I am blushing now, lol. A great piece.

    Christine

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Apr 19, 2010

    “Love is in the air”

  • Marie Antoinette on Apr 19, 2010

    Interesting words to describe lovemaking as an art form. Brilliant.

  • Dame Barbara on Apr 19, 2010

    This was hot. The way you describe lovemaking is very very erotic and intelligent wrapped in one, mind and body, the best lovemaking there is. You did a wonderful job here and you set out to do what you meant to do – to arouse! Thanks for the imagery and the little bit of Heaven.

  • ashan1614 on Apr 19, 2010

    The build-up and anticipation in the mind is half the fun. :)

  • diamondpoet on Apr 20, 2010

    The way you write this stuff I think that all women would like to visit that place and never return. Excellent post as usual.

  • lillyrose on Apr 21, 2010

    WOW… it’s getting hot in here! great imagery and you are right, it is better if it starts in the mind!!:-)

  • Ty on Apr 25, 2010

    I agree with lillyrose, it is always better when it starts from the mind. Great piece.

  • Lipstick on Apr 26, 2010

    hihihi what can i say..
    i want to play safe..k
    can i say ..nice one my friend..really a nice one piece of art
    (^_^)

  • neha80 on Apr 26, 2010

    Interesting post, just today i know more about it. Good subject selection for writing articles. Thanks for sharing this good one.

    Anjal

  • Tulan on Apr 26, 2010

    Just wonderful, so passionate.

  • ShadowPsychos on May 2, 2010

    great write :)

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