Welcome to Hell

sandie on Jul 14, 2009

Tags: eternity, Hell, lucifer

When you are really evil you may end up in this place.

Welcome to hell

When you were with god you never remained true

You can scream or yell

Where nobody can hear you.

I am glad you dropped in

Down here we can have one hell of a party that’s for sure

Let the party begin

You are stuck here forever more.

Speaking of the devil

Here is Lucifer your master of this hellhole

He’s a bit of a rebel

He owns your very soul.

As you have just entered the gates of hell

You can forget about seeing god

For all of eternity this is your cell

Down in the depths of hell it always burns hot.

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BrandonGates on Jul 14, 2009
The emotion in this poem is strong and sincere…
ken bultman on Jul 14, 2009
I believe you’ve captured the essence of the underlife.
ladybaby on Jul 14, 2009
This is a poem from a different direction. Great write.
sweetievee on Jul 14, 2009
I can’t truly say that I’ve seen God while being here on Earth either, so I don’t know that I’ll know what I’m missing… I’m sure God will let me know fully how great he is before sending me to hell though, because that seems to be how the irony of life goes…
Michael Stonecipher on Jul 14, 2009
The sky-trod eye may see a different fate
a vision of a God without such hate
for once we’ve paid the wages of our sin
I’d hope the gates of heaven let us in…
ellenhart on Jul 14, 2009
very intense,but wonderful
Syed on Jul 14, 2009
Nice work Sandie
AngelicaRaene on Jul 14, 2009
I could feel the mixture of emotions in this poem, anger, apathy, regret, and sorrow. Very well written!
inuni on Jul 14, 2009
There is an evil;
That evil is not sin
How very strange is hell
Or the one that let us in.
Lostash on Jul 14, 2009
Sounds like my sort of place!
ERMAC147 on Jul 14, 2009
I’M SCARED
fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa on Jul 14, 2009
Frightening thought I could only hope that I am seen as being worthy to enter the gates of heaven.
JonnieWall on Jul 15, 2009
Sounds like addiction, vivid picture
James DeVere on Jul 15, 2009
The only hell is the idea of fear to scare people into a false reality
serowa on Jul 20, 2009
Great job in depicting the reality that many deny.
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