Three twenty-somethings and their pets move to Minot ND.

We arrived in Minot by rented truck
in a deep mid-winter freeze,
sleek drapes of ice and blown snow
decorated hills and city streets.
The housing agent shrugged,
defensive as he spoke of hillside hovels
soon to be condemned and destroyed,
that could be rented without a wait.

Our move-in parodied old movies,
we were three imitation Keystone Kops,
two male cats ignoring each other,
one sweet little dog named Snowball
who watched with smiling eyes,
as if it all was for her entertainment.
We hauled and carried, slipped, fell down,
but had all moved in by midnight.

We ignored carpets matted down flat,
and a bathroom of many dark secrets
that we hoped it would not disclose.
The kitchen was modest, yet filthy,
tiny fridge, small range, half-sinks,
cupboards to hold half of our things,
all dressed in multiple layers
of grease and old food spills, and dust.

Next day, we drove to buy groceries
in the truck, since there was no car,
then way across town to return it.
We hoped the torn visors would pass,
along with the seatbelt stubs
left after Snowball’s rest area snack.
The truck rental man delighted
in assessing additional charges.

The long, cold walk to The Swamp
-as the neighborhood named itself-
was interrupted half way there,
by police, who thought us vagrants.
We stood in the wind through inquiries.
On their leaving, we next encountered
a bridge with these painted words:
WELCOME TO THE MAGIC CITY.

It was just what cold misery needed,
three faces twitched, then a chuckle
began the short climb to hysterics.
We pointed and howled, slapped thighs
and danced in small circles of laughter.
We were warm for the last few blocks.
Three years later, Minot in my mirrors,
I thought; maybe the sign was right.

It had been home, for awhile.

Copyright 2008 Casey Mack

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  • Used to be Shelly on Jun 7, 2009

    Perfect description of a long distance move. Good job.

  • Kate Smedley on Jun 7, 2009

    I like the phrase ‘a bathroom of many dark secrets that we hoped it would not disclose’. This is very cleverly written.

  • Katie Marie on Jun 7, 2009

    Ah, the fond memories of those early rental days. I think you’ve inspired me. Thanks for sharing yours.

  • moteintheeye on Jun 7, 2009

    Yes the early days of being out. Dark secrets in the bathroom, i hope i do not have any.

    motie

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Jun 8, 2009

    Wow, I’ve stepping into your magic city! Unbelievable! Give you a “click”.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Jun 8, 2009

    I’m sorry for the typing error.

    Wow, I’ve stepped into your magic city! Unbelievable! Give you a “click”.

  • OhSugar on Jun 10, 2009

    Great story. From chaos to laughter, a pretty good move:)

  • Roberta J. Morrison on Aug 27, 2009

    Fun read…

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