A poem about feeling lost.

 
Where are you? she yelled down the well.
I am here. Can you not see me?
No she answered.
I can only see a dark smudge
out of the corner of my eye.
Where are you? she yelled down the well.
I am still here. Can you not hear me?
No she answered.
I can only hear a faint humming
in the depths of my ear.
Where are you? she yelled down the well.
When are you coming back?
 
I cannot answer her.

4
Liked it
Comments (2)
  • Angelo on Jan 26, 2009

    Very dark. Very good.

  • mknight on Mar 30, 2009

    strange but true!

Leave a Comment

Hi there!

Hello! Welcome to Authspot, the spot for creative writing.
Read some stories and poems, and be sure to subscribe to our feed!

Find the Spot

Loading