Wendy and Peter

johnnydod on Feb 26, 2010

Reading Peter Pan.

The little girl reads the words of J.M. Barrie

And as her mind and thoughts wonder through

The make believe world she has entered into

She becomes part of it ,part of the untrue.

She is the princess, she is the maiden fair

He the hero is her prince the answer to her prayer

She is frightened, she is laughing, she is low she is high

But now with peter she can fly

Lost in the words of the book that she reads

As the author and story teller plant their seeds

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Comments (18)

chellsy on Feb 26, 2010
great share
sambhafusia on Feb 26, 2010
nice share..interesting and well composed.thanks
Christine Ramsay on Feb 26, 2010
It is good to see a child get so involved in a story. Nice work.

Christine
Val Mills on Feb 26, 2010
Nice work, I wanted it to continue longer.
Darla Cooke on Feb 26, 2010
Nice poem.
LoveDoctor on Feb 26, 2010
This is awesome. Good work. Finally, Peter can save her. “She can fly with him.”
diamondpoet on Feb 26, 2010
What a magical story, thanks for sharing.
giftarist on Feb 26, 2010
Nice share. You’re a great story writer.
ken bultman on Feb 26, 2010
Cheers to all the Wendys of the world. Nice write.
johnnydod on Feb 26, 2010
you lot are wonderful thanks
Shirley Shuler on Feb 27, 2010
Great share, you\\\’re a wonderful storyteller
ujwal28 on Feb 27, 2010
Nice writing
qasimdharamsy on Feb 27, 2010
Noce one….
albert1jemi on Feb 27, 2010
great share
deep blue on Feb 28, 2010
I like Wendy’s hamburger a lot and to Johnny, you have a clear poetry which I liked much.
standingproud on Mar 1, 2010
It is nice for a small one to fantasize, we never really grow up, dream world is a nice place to be .,nice write Johnny
Judy Kaelin on Mar 1, 2010
Very nice, Johnny
fragile18 on Mar 27, 2010
nice!

Hi there!