Watching your daughter mature, get married and leave home is hard.
They grow up so fast.

My daughter is getting so mature.

Must have the talk with her I am sure.

Let her know that woman are goddesses.

Not just  some mere sex object.

It’s alright  for you to say no.

Baby you always have a choice.

When you disagree with a young man,

yell no at the top of your voice.

I want her to be aware and informed.

Intimate relations before marriage is so wrong.

But once school is over for you.

Then you can make plans for the rest of your life,

Take your time there’s no rush, that’s what you should do.

First find a job, then get yourself established.

Later on down the line probably marriage.

Then perhaps a grandchild or two.

Oh my daughter look at you.

All grown up and so mature.

I love you.

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Comments (9)
  • diamondpoet on Oct 27, 2009

    I don’t have a daughter but this is probably what I would of said to her.

  • Darla Cooke on Oct 27, 2009

    Great poem!

  • Snooky on Oct 27, 2009

    Neat and sweet

  • Sourav on Oct 27, 2009

    Nice and sweet!

  • Steven West on Oct 27, 2009

    Very touching poem.

  • Eunice Tan on Oct 27, 2009

    Smart poem. Important question.

  • Jane Jane on Oct 28, 2009

    very sweet. well said.

  • xoxo on Oct 28, 2009

    Some good advices. Sweet indeed.

  • krasha on Oct 28, 2009

    Brilliant!

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