Gentle strokes.

Soft velvet petals
Caressed by a man’s strong hand
Become wet with dew

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  • Papa Sparks on Oct 19, 2009

    Wow! Lovely and evocative my friend.

  • ken bultman on Oct 19, 2009

    Nice, indeed. Something sensual comes to mind.

  • Teves on Oct 19, 2009

    Wow a very nice flower…

  • ceegirl on Oct 19, 2009

    pretty

  • Christine Ramsay on Oct 19, 2009

    That is so beautiful.

  • Sourav on Oct 19, 2009

    This is interesting!

  • cutedrishti8 on Oct 19, 2009

    That’s beautiful

  • LOVELYHONEY on Oct 19, 2009

    my mind has started

    realising the magic eye

    haiku presents

    5 7 5

    is it ok

  • Shirley Shuler on Oct 19, 2009

    Hi Lady Sunshine, as always, very beautiful!!

  • T. S. GARP on Oct 19, 2009

    Nice metaphor….. :)

  • johnnydod on Oct 20, 2009

    cute, just like you

  • giftarist on Oct 20, 2009

    I like this!

  • Lostash on Oct 20, 2009

    Erotic methinks!

  • deep blue on Oct 21, 2009

    That’s the most passionate haiku I’ve ever read. ‘Love it.

  • razumtina on Oct 23, 2009

    Beautiful!!!!

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