Flowers are all about sex.

Photo by Scott Law 

An attempt at alliteration or alliterative poetry…

(Alliteration is the repetition of the same consonant sounds that are in the beginning or near each other in sequence.)

Dew drops delight in decadence
Dripping deliciously and deliriously
Dancing in delicate debauchery
Drenching dainty daffodils at dawn

An attempt at a senryu…

(Senryu is a variation of the haiku with seventeen syllables or less.)

Dew drops shatter
Upon velvet petals
Flowers in bloom

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  • momofplenty on Jun 14, 2012

    Lovely

  • evcalangian on Jun 14, 2012

    Very creative.

  • Buzz J on Jun 14, 2012

    Very creative. Thank you.

  • lauralu on Jun 14, 2012

    So very nice Lady Sunshine

  • lauralu on Jun 14, 2012

    So very nice Lady Sunshine

  • AmosTheCat on Jun 14, 2012

    Very delicate, both the topic and its treatment in Haiku. Thank you, Lady Sunshine.

  • Shirley Shuler on Jun 14, 2012

    Hi Lady Sunshine, you make it sound, oh so sensual. I never thought of flowers being all about sex, but I must say, you are absolutely right :)

  • Erin Miller on Jun 14, 2012

    I like the top one the best! :)

  • Fleur D on Jun 14, 2012

    Good to know the definition as I have forgotten much of my poetry types to better understand the poem’s structure.

  • Fleur D on Jun 14, 2012

    Good to know the definition as I have forgotten much of my poetry types to better understand the poem’s structure.

  • sabanawaz on Jun 15, 2012

    lovely

  • Chris Bailie on Jun 15, 2012

    Beautiful, thank you.

  • Starpisces on Jun 16, 2012

    excellent, you know so much about poetry, well done, Lady Sunshine.

  • roviepacaldo on Jun 16, 2012

    Lovely piece lady sunshine! God bless u

  • Stable on Jun 17, 2012

    Nice alliteration!

  • Milky Way1 on Jun 17, 2012

    Cool way

  • lonelyplanet on Jun 18, 2012

    Very delicate, both the topic and its treatment in Haiku. Thank you, Lady Sunshine.

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    love it

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    thanks

  • stevetheblogger on Jun 18, 2012

    Wonderful descriptive article loved it
    Best Wishes
    stevetheblogger

  • Starpisces on Jun 19, 2012

    revisit :

    oh yes, Lonelyplanet’s comment was Amos the Cat’s….
    why don’t he/she select mine? Proven that mine not up to his/her standard, sob sob….

    ;)

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