An Ode to Heat. A Poem.

Yesterday’s dawn broke hot, bright, and blue,

The early morning heat absorbing the dew.

My girlfriend had phoned from her poolside,

inviting us over to try out the new slide.

While driving to her place, with thighs stuck to seat,

I couldn’t imagine a day without heat.

That was yesterday though, the past dead and gone,

And this morning brought a much frostier dawn.

Streets littered with death in the form of brown leaves,

Thermometers boasting a huge drop in degrees.

I couldn’t believe what went on as I slept,

and I shivered with dread and I’m quite sure I wept.

To me – hot is good, and hotter is better,

I’d rather be sweating than needing a sweater.

Why do I live here? I was born here of course,

Then married, had children – I have no remorse.

But, as I grow older, my thoughts tend to roam,

to sun baked locales that I might one day call home.

Pull up roots and just GO, buy a cottage near the sand,

SPF, a bikini – I wanna be safe, but I gotta be tanned!

One day my dream will be real – this I know,

The day when I’ll never again live in snow!!

Amen

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Comments (15)
  • Aroosa Gloomy on Sep 16, 2011

    Lovely

  • Brian on Sep 16, 2011

    Wonderful words. Well done k.

  • ImKarn23 on Sep 16, 2011

    Brian, thanks for reading and your kind comment! Poetry is not my forte so any encouragement is appreciated!

  • Martin Kloess on Sep 17, 2011

    very very good, lose some of those unneeded pronouns,

  • ImKarn23 on Sep 17, 2011

    thanks, Martin..I agree

  • Nali on Sep 17, 2011

    nice one!

  • dwisuka on Sep 21, 2011

    nice

  • Martin Kloess on Sep 25, 2011

    stopped by to find out how the poetry is going,

  • mdrkarim7 on Oct 2, 2011

    While i read this one, i had fun, like firing a gun to none.
    Not a nun!
    Ha ha aha ha!
    I know you will like this comment-
    I found you brilliant!

  • Rosettaartist1 on Oct 13, 2011

    well written.

  • rgreenfield on Oct 17, 2011

    very nice… the snow doesn’t bother you yet? ;)

  • Joe Ram on Oct 21, 2011

    Nice work!

  • KittyK on Nov 18, 2011

    This was absolutely amazing…

  • ImKarn23 on Nov 18, 2011

    @kittyK ThanksSO much!

  • Kristie Claar on Jan 11, 2012

    Such a wonderful poem! I hope you make your dream come true!

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