What a Moment

richard reed on Apr 7, 2009

Deep in it.

through the thought of lust

high hopes of penetration

ready to bust

yet yield to concentration

i love to play,when i visit your y

get you soaked,as i take you for a ride

take it slow at first

then put your ass in the fast lane

have your toes curl-in

as your screaming my name

begging for more,

as your lick-in your lips

working your hips

collecting skin from my back

under your fingertips

losing yourself baby

lost in a zone

penalized by the pounding

has loud in your moans

no more soft whispers

as we both groan

exhaling to a release

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Comments (11)

Timothy P Stavert on Apr 7, 2009
Ride ‘em Richard!
I hope you have recovered.

Tim
S M Blomker on Apr 7, 2009
very erotic piece of writing.
clay hurtubise on Apr 7, 2009
Whew! I take it you took a cold shower after that one!
Thanks,
Clay
rutherfranc on Apr 7, 2009
erotic..
Ruby Hawk on Apr 7, 2009
A little hot and heavy, way to go cowboy.
George W Whitehead on Apr 8, 2009
Phew! how was it for you?
Peter Cimino on Apr 9, 2009
WOW! Okay then. Hope it was goof for you!
Mulke Dee on Apr 9, 2009
Wow!Wishful thinking on my part. …very expressive and nicely written to convey your emotions! I don\’t think I can think about writing while reading this.
spiritwalker on Apr 9, 2009
Now theres one to get your pulse racing.
lh on Apr 17, 2009
u will love secret poetry exchanged between top electrician too ur equally hot and length is to u strength
Linda Lori on Jul 24, 2009
Wow! Another erotic read! Passionate!

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