When do quitting joins the picture??

it is an instinct to fight when somebody’s pulling them down..

we always fight..fair and clean..

just to prove not being defeated..

to show we can survive..

to show the independence..

we fought..bare handed we fought..

we always do..

and never admitting the defeat..the fall..

we tried to stay and fight..

for our happiness..for independence..for survival..

for everybody’s sake..

we never quit..everybody don’t..

we fight on..fight ’till we can’t fight any longer..

we fight ’till our bodies and minds allowed..

we continue while we can..

quitting is never mentioned..

even if the things we fight for is totally impossible..

even if odds are making them more complicated..

even if it hurts so much..

even if it hurts too much people..

even if quitting is the best way to end everything..

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  • vickyLP on Dec 26, 2009

    amazing…just awesome…!

  • silversmile13 on Dec 26, 2009

    tnx for the comment vickyLP..xoxoxo

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