Not sure why I wrote this one, guess I was thinking of home.

What am I going to do without you in my life
A thought that grabs me by my heart and threatens a life of strife
What am I going to do without ever seeing your smile
The only thing that ever made my life seem worthwhile
What am I going to do without your whisper in my ear
Saying those things I love to hear melting away all my worry and fear
What am I going to do without your sweet embrace
A life not worth living without my hidden place
What am I going to do without your love to carry on
Like a never ending night destined to never see a dawn
What am I going to do without your laughter to touch my heart
Knowing your the only one that could ever tear our love apart
What am I going to do without you in my life?

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  • Christine Ramsay on May 27, 2010

    That is such a heart breaking piece. Beautifully written.

    Christine

  • Jimmy Shilaho on May 27, 2010

    I understand why you wrote it. You are deeply in love with someone special.

  • ShadowPsychos on May 28, 2010

    very nice…good flow :)

  • Clara Lauren on Jun 3, 2010

    Touching and beutifully written as always x

  • sara20 on Jun 7, 2010

    Excellent manner and very well-written sentence is doing, with useful information includes a good things you have in your article.

    Thanks

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