Simple things do so much.

I said hi to a girl in tears
She vaguely smiled back as she went on
What did I change

I helped pick up the old mans tools
He raised an eyebrow as he watched
What did I change

I went to church and told a tall tale
The old blind lady giggled
What did I change

I wrote a poem just being whimsical
You read it and felt something
What did I change

More of my work:

 Hear the Hammer
 Pleasant Words

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  • Christine Ramsay on Feb 6, 2009

    You have cheered me up so you have changed something Milton. Well done.

    Christine

  • Debra. on Feb 6, 2009

    Nice job, Milton. Small deeds they may be but they can mean so much for some.

  • CutestPrincess on Feb 6, 2009

    you changed a lot, from a good poet to a great one!

  • lisa on Feb 6, 2009

    You make me giggle, smile and have hope in things.

  • Leanna C Rose on Feb 12, 2009

    :Oh my God” that was good!

  • Palestrya on Apr 18, 2011

    Very good poem! No one really knows what they change, but rest assured every good that anyone does changes something!

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