The things I want most may not seem like much (or very important) to others….

What do I want? Not much, really

Sunshine, blue skies and beds of roses

Fields of wildflowers, colors in full bloom

Sunsets on the beach on a mid-summer’s night

And stars twinkling against a blanket of black

Candlelight and music mingled

With whispers of love, adoration and admiration

A hand to hold when life turns scary

A shoulder to cry on whenever I’m sad

A faithful friend who will never betray me

Promises kept and obligations met

Meaningful conversation and side-splitting laughter

Adventure and excitement; new challenges to meet

Peace of mind amidst a world of chaos

A sanctuary and a refuge and joy, unspeakable

Health and healing for my war-weary body

A clear path to follow, a plan for my life

An inner strength, courage to change my future

In the grand scheme of things

When so many clamor for fortune and fame

Power and prestige are not my goal

So what is it that I want? Not much to some

But it’s everything to me

 

 

 

 ©2011 – Andrea J. Shannon

 

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  • LoveDoctor on Oct 10, 2011

    Beautiful words and nice imagery. I can relate because most of these things are important to me as well.

  • tod on Oct 10, 2011

    add me on as one of your faithful friend .. :) good work..
    I think all of those things is important to all of us

  • mdrkarim7 on Oct 10, 2011

    Lovely! Thanks.

  • mphsglo on Oct 10, 2011

    Very nice.

  • ittech on Oct 10, 2011

    I like it!

  • webseowriters on Oct 10, 2011

    lovey

  • Sunjhini on Oct 10, 2011

    what a beautiful write. Isn’t this all we need :)

  • LadyElena on Oct 10, 2011

    May your humble requests come true.

    Ps. Are you sure you dont want to put a Lexus in there. :)

  • ashan1614 on Oct 10, 2011

    LadyElena – perhaps a new Lexus…. My current vehicle is pretty old. :)

  • FX777222999 on Oct 10, 2011

    I think you want change…in your life.

  • erwinkennythomas on Oct 10, 2011

    it seems like the world to me! beautiful and imaginative!

  • erwinkennythomas on Oct 10, 2011

    it seems like the world to me! beautiful and imaginative! a picture well painted!

  • erwinkennythomas on Oct 10, 2011

    it seems like the world to me! beautiful and imaginative! a picture well painted!

  • erwinkennythomas on Oct 10, 2011

    it seems like the world to me! beautiful and imaginative! a picture well painted!

  • T. S. Lewis on Oct 13, 2011

    I will have whay she is having :) .

  • FX777222999 on Oct 15, 2011

    Revisiting this article.

  • gaby7 on Oct 17, 2011

    If there was anything I liked about this poem, then it was this:

    “A clear path to follow, a plan for my life”

    Great work Ashan!

  • Prakash Vaghela on Oct 19, 2011

    nice sharing

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