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What Do You Believe

castleboundbook on Feb 10, 2012
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A poetic meditation on faith.

What do you believe

Do you believe

In heaven

Do you truly believe

That heaven exists

Is not a fancy story

Told just to soothe our fears

That there is nothing beyond this life

I hope you do believe

For if you don’t

Life is very bleak indeed!

© 2012 Vic Jones

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  • sheilanewton on Feb 10, 2012

    Excellent. The language is stunning and you leave a powerful message to your readers. Be proud of this – it’s superb.

  • CHIPMUNK on Feb 10, 2012

    to believe is to be hopeful

  • pattiann on Feb 10, 2012

    I believe in heaven. Life would be hard if you did not try to prepare in this life for the afterlife. Excellent poem.

  • pattiann on Feb 10, 2012

    I believe in heaven. Life would be hard if you did not try to prepare in this life for the afterlife. Excellent poem

  • indianwriting on Feb 11, 2012

    i m dead scared of hell :) that fear is what keeps me on track…on glidepath :)

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