What does “GREEN” mean to you? Does it mean money? Does it mean a perfect, weed-free, lawn? Or do you think of the environment? Are the first two killing the third?

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With silent tongue

she spoke to me

Of dancing leaves,

on massive trees.

Of honey bees

and maple trees,

crystal streams

and summer breeze.

She spoke to me

of other things

dandelion weeds,

and fairy rings.

Bygone days,

and worn out ways,

how the quest for green

destroyed something.

Of dollar bills

and treeless hills,

Of perfect lawns,

and soulless songs.

Of concrete worlds

where children play,

and office buildings

and day long stays.

With silent tongue

she cried to me

for a budding leaf,

on a naked tree.

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  • HelloSiti on Jul 14, 2009

    Yes, tree is normally naked.

    This is the first time I read your poem.

    Is it for Writing Challenge Round 6?

    Green for me is about nature.

  • Marie Milton on Jul 14, 2009

    I guess I’m your first commentess : )
    My favourite colours are blue and green, for they are Nature.
    I guess GREEN for me means anything of Nature’s creation, nothing man-made…
    Humans don’t see the fact that “Without the Green, we are nought”, quoted my Harriet Luke
    Take Care

  • Marie Milton on Jul 14, 2009

    Damn, Siti got in there before me…never mind.
    I thought I might add that I’d rather live in the forest in a tree house then in a house with a weed-free lawn…can’t think of anything worse…

  • Elizabeth Abbott on Jul 14, 2009

    Powerful words of wisdom. Good poem.

  • LOVELYHONEY on Jul 14, 2009

    green is life

    its beauty

    its green eyes

    we love
    may be mine

    may be yours

    greenery refreshes

    as nothing else can do

    hope all your life

    there will be greenery
    for ever for you

  • Darla Cooke on Jul 14, 2009

    Lovely poem! When I hear the word green, I think of the environment.

  • rajeev bhargava on Jul 14, 2009

    without a moment’s hesitation, the first word that comes when i hear green is Fertility (Life). when spring appears the first thing we see are green buds; the colour of life. and blue is the colour of purity. before MAN began polluting the seas, everthing was pure, clean and blue. the yellow sun is also symbolic of warmth. lovely poem!

  • clay hurtubise on Jul 14, 2009

    Very nice, love the flow.
    Thanks,
    Clay

  • Lostash on Jul 14, 2009

    Excellent piece, I feel your pain when considering the modern worls around us.

  • Deep Blue on Jul 14, 2009

    Very well written. I like the short lines to the point nicely woven.

  • Daisy Peasblossom on Jul 14, 2009

    I bought my place for the trees and the greenery. My lawn has dandelions, clover and little strawberries.

  • PR Mace on Jul 14, 2009

    Powerfully written. Green to me means my large old oaks that guard my house and the plants I grow. Green means the clothesline I use for my dryer. Green is a good color but some people can’t see it for they are colorblind.

  • Ruby Hawk on Jul 17, 2009

    B, What beautiful sentiments. I love my green trees, creeks and rivers. I hate to pass by where woods once were and see a naked hill side. it’s painful to see.

  • Mark Gordon Brown on Jul 19, 2009

    Green can also mean “Jealously” or “New”.
    I really hate golf course style lawns, much better to have trees and other plants.

  • oldster on Jul 20, 2009

    Couldn\’t agree more, green for me, well put.

  • Alistair Briggs on Jul 20, 2009

    Very thought-povoking

  • Katie Marie on Jul 20, 2009

    Beautifully expressed. Great entry for the writing challenge.

  • Duff D Moss on Jul 20, 2009

    A nice piece full of meaning and impact. Great job. Thanks for contributing to the challenge. Hope you have a go next round too.

  • BradONeill on Jul 21, 2009

    That was a lovely poem. Good job you freaking hippy! Green is simply a religion for those who have no religion. and for some who do have a religion it is a second religion. Based on lies yet evident simply by going outside and enjoying all that is offered.

  • BradONeill on Jul 21, 2009

    I feel I should explain the above but I can’t. It was meant to be funny not mean. Damn percoset and beer. Anyway Great poem. And Money does not kill the environment. This is a big rock we live on it spins around really fast and stuff grows on it. What I meant by religion is the Environmentalists are fundamentalists that have their doctrine and won’t accept any information to the contrary. The movement is largely based on lies, emotional responses, and flawed science. there should be a comma after lies. The truth of nature can be seen by simply walking outside and its wonder and beauty can and does inspire religious devotion. In the Koran there is a beautiful passage that states to know God exists simply look at the sunset. The passage goes on to name several other miracles in nature.

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