This one is a good attempt, but I think you missing the second rule of the form. Each words have to be in the reverse order. You have a point though. The world can suck.

Filled me with intense delight

nice but not a complete P poem style. good try anyway

This one is a little better, but one of his requirements was that it be about an internalized reflection, so it should have been more about you than the world, unless all this bitterness you feel toward the world is somehow a reflection of your inner self, but I don’t see how that might be completely true of a person who calls theirself lovelies.

Try writing of form in reverse–thinking–reverse in form of writing try. Avoid, the word “the” avoid. Be clever be. Think Yoda of ways writing by writing ways of Yoda-think.

It’s actually like love lies, but yeah I get what you mean. I’m thinking about deleting this poem because it’s a failed attempt anyway.. :/