What is Freedom?

drelayaraja on Jan 1, 2010

Tags: 2010, blood, chains, drelayaraja, elayaraja, freedom, human, hut, poor, truth, unfed

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About Freedom. My Question for 2010

What is Freedom?

© 31st Dec 2009 Dr.P.Elayaraja

What is freedom?

With the chains uncut.

What is freedom?

With human values hurt.

What is freedom?

With the truth’s mouth shut.

What is freedom?

With masses living in the hut.

What is freedom?

With the poor unfed.

What is freedom?

With the blood that is been shed.

© 31st Dec 2009 Dr.P.Elayaraja

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Frederick Zammit on Jan 1, 2010
Great piece of work.
qasimdharamsy on Jan 1, 2010
Nice work…good….
Starpisces on Jan 1, 2010
Bravo!
What is freedom? To be able to write with no restriction, just like Triond..
metro7 on Jan 1, 2010
Freedom without restrictions of any kind is worth while or else no point.good write thxs for the share
johnnydod on Jan 1, 2010
this is a very powerful message for us all.. lets hope this new decade will show us all the way.
richardpeeej on Jan 1, 2010
Nice words-very meaningful
Ramalingam on Jan 1, 2010
Nice poem.Thank you
albert1jemi on Jan 1, 2010
excellent words
fmakeita on Jan 1, 2010
Great Expressed. Great work dude, right on!
bailieman on Jan 1, 2010
Thoughtful poem, so many in the world have little or no freedom
AlmaG on Jan 1, 2010
Freedom is to express what’s in your thoughts and in your heart. Wonderful poem my friend
Videomark on Jan 1, 2010
Good work. Sometimes we take freedom for granted.
julianhw on Jan 1, 2010
There is a vast difference between freedom from….. and freedom to….
cutedrishti8 on Jan 1, 2010
Wonderful piece of work..
SharifaMcFarlane on Jan 1, 2010
Freedom has a price.
Interesting poem.
upeshdaa on Jan 1, 2010
it’s very nice .
8Shei8 on Jan 1, 2010
In other countries, freedom does not exist.
diwansetya on Jan 1, 2010
good one
Eunice Tan on Jan 1, 2010
Freedom is something valuable for us.
qasimdharamsy on Jan 2, 2010
nice work done..valuable information
jamesjames7817 on Jan 2, 2010
Wow! Your poem really wows me! I think in the other perspective,

….our freedom end when the freedom of others begin…

keep posting!
Goodselfme on Jan 2, 2010
Very powerful strength here.TX
fragile18 on Jan 2, 2010
great work. i’m also looking forward this April, im turning 18 and yes, freedom!!!
alc on Jan 2, 2010
To speak your mind and say as you please thanks for this enjoyable read!
xoxo on Jan 2, 2010
Very nice piece. Well said.
Joe Dorish on Jan 3, 2010
You ask the right questions with this poem!
fashion girl on Jan 3, 2010
Freedom is nothing else but utopia
Susan The Poet on Jan 3, 2010
So nice and so true.
PhoenixRox on Jan 4, 2010
This says it all. You have driven across the point very well. A painful truth. None of us are really free. God bless u
diamondpoet on Jan 5, 2010
Beautiful work, well written, great message.
devsir on Jan 7, 2010
Hats off to your intelligent writing
Ranjan Mathews on Jan 8, 2010
Nice. You may see my Tibet Unchained.
babu on Jan 8, 2010
very nice!!!!!!!!
Geomorphosis on Jan 8, 2010
Very true. Good poem.
Carmen Magnolia Song on Jan 8, 2010
Great article! Thank you for sharing.
Leonardo da Vinci E. on Jan 12, 2010
Exquisite.
Moses Ingram on Jan 12, 2010
Very well said – What is freedom in a world of such turmoil?
joanne721 on Jan 14, 2010
yeah. nice post…

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