What I feel like inside sometimes. Deep poetry.

What is that sound?

That ringing in my ears.

That screaming that I hear?

The sound of my soul yearning for destruction?

The sound of my deepest desires ripping through the fabric of my acting?

It wails and tells me tales of what it wants to really do.

How it wants to tear him limb from limb.

How it aspires to crush his confidence and snatch his talents from him.

Oh, how cruel it is.

How could such a heartless thing exist?

It must be a demon, or a monster, or the devil himself!

We must crush it at once!

Make sure it never sees the light of day again!

Oh, what a tragedy that would be.

Because that ‘’thing’’ is me. 

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  • Aroosa Gloomy on Dec 10, 2011

    I like the line
    How it aspires to crush his confidence and snatch his talents from him

  • caribbean369 on Dec 10, 2011

    Budy, This is real feelings coming from you and I like that. Which makes it beautiful; because, it describes to me how vulnerable, speical and emotional this poem really is down deep. This is a very heart felt poem and you know what. You tell God to silent that voice in you that is temping you and he will do so. :)

  • rama devi nina on Dec 12, 2011

    Emotive and thoughtful.

  • lara on Dec 28, 2011

    It almost describes what I wrote about my deafness but all about sounds of silence… go check it out!!!

  • Kristie Claar on Jan 10, 2012

    Great work.

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